User:ThaiMilkTea/Central valley/ThaiMilkTea Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Js41111


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ThaiMilkTea/Central_Valley_(California)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Central Valley (California)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Yes your information is related to the topic, but I believe you should add more details about the negative affects. You can add information about how greenhouse gases are affecting climate change. For the second sentence, how does that exactly relate to climate change or add information about how it is related.