User:Thanhthe3200/Bent's rule/Kekekandy Peer Review

General info
Thanhthe3200 and KTCpscChem
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sandbox Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bent's rule

Evaluate the drafted changes
- the added figure is wonderful! I love the animations; its an upgrade from the 2D figures on the original article

- be sure to use wikipedia's built in citation generator and not ACS, so you can fit Wikipedia's format. It's the ' " ' symbol in the top bar.

- I like the use of not using "this," "there," and "it," but I do notice all or a lot of the sentences start with the same word in the same paragraph, such as "Bent's Rule." It would make it flow better to switch up the first word in a sentence every so often

- the information added seems logical and adequate to be in a wikipedia article!

-"Additionally, Bent’s rule can help chemists chose their starting materials to drive the reaction towards a particular product." change "chose" to "choose"

- lots of good content in the applications!