User:Thaonguyen050300/Corporate design/Kiyana929 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

thaonguyen050300

Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Thaonguyen050300/Corporate_design&oldid=1003141580


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Corporate design

Evaluate the drafted changes
Thao Nguyen does well in defining corporate design in the Wiki article. I think that it just needs to be less condensed in the first paragraph so that it is easier to read. The organization of the article has a really good layout and has good subtitles for each depiction on the topic.

The article needs more links on the definitions and added sources on the topic of corporate design as I can only find two references in this article.

Each sentence starts with “a corporation” or “a corporate”, try changing the sentence structure so that it is not too repetitive.

Thao added a contents section, which I want to add to my own article too. I want to also incorporate the subtitles into mine as well.

Thao does well in having a neutral tone throughout the article, as well as keeping it very informative.

Great work!