User:ThatBoiNick/Lawrence R. Baca/Janellh1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ThatBoiNick


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ThatBoiNick/Lawrence_R._Baca?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead:
The content provided in the lead is short and gets straight to the point. It includes the name, birthplace, and birthdate. There is a title which further explains the purpose of the lead.

Content:
Article has content that is relevant to their topic. More content about their accomplishments should be added. Most of the content is about their upbringing and does not show examples of how they made American Indians voices heard.

Organization:
Content added is clear to read. So far the content seems well organized but more information and sections are needed. It needs an accomplishments section where more details and examples are provided. I would also recommend adding an image as well.

New article:
This article only has one reference and therefore does not meet the notability requirements. I definitely recommend looking on google scholar and google books. The information provides basic facts about the persons life but does not really dive deep into what they did.

Overall Impression:
The content added is definitely a good start but needs more references. The only content in this article that mentions his accomplishments is the last sentence in the personal life section. I would say to expand on that and make your next section about examples where they helped the community. Look on google books and filter your searches.