User:ThatIndividual99/Transgender Persons (Protection of Rights) Act, 2018/Camrynli19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?: ThatIndividual99
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:ThatIndividual99/Transgender Persons (Protection of Rights) Act, 2018

Overall Evaluation:
This is a very good paragraph. It is a subtopic, that very much relates to the overall topic. The paragraph stays on task and is backed up by reliable sources. The paragraph is already quite strong, I don't think much needs to be changed to make it better. However, be careful and remain neutral in your paragraph it might be a little bias.