User:ThatOnePerson25/Karen Nussbaum/Lahight22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Myown3arth and ThatOnePerson25


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ThatOnePerson25/Karen_Nussbaum?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Karen Nussbaum

Evaluate the drafted changes
Question: Is the content added relevant to the article?

Answer: Most of the information in the article is relevant to the topic. The background information was important for telling us about Karen Nussbaum's life. Also, the information about her involvement with the 9 to 5 movement and the AFL-CIO along with her achievments were also very relevant to Karen Nussbaum. The only thing that distracted me was that it states that Bill Clinton was the president under the background information and I just wasn't sure what the president had to do with her background.

Question: Is the content added neutral?/Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

Answer: I believe that this article is very neutral. I couldn't find any claims that were biased toward Karen Nussbaum or any aspect of her life. The article sort of praises Karen for her achievements but it is not biased, it is crucial knowledge for her story.

Question: Do the links work?/Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say?

Answer: I went through the article and checked the links that were connected to another wikipedia article and they all seem to work. Also, the links that reference the citations are accurate as well. The sources provided all had information aligning with the claims in this article so that was good.