User:The.Jeremiah02/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Blue Moons Boys
 * Article Evaluation:
 * Overall with the sources presented and information used, the article is well written and neutral about the Blue Moon Boy history. However, I believe that the article can be more detailed and dive into the lives of the other members some. Though this article was written and mostly completed in 2010, the sources are decently "up-to-date". With the group ending more than 50 years ago, there won't be many sources that will present any new information regarding the group. Moreover, because the group ended so long ago, some sources were unavailable so there can definitely be some updating with the sources. The organization of is fairly easy to follow and the images presented are appealing and helps the reader put name to face. This article can definitely be worked on as there are some gaps regarding personal life, albums, and even details on the later life and how they went their separate ways.
 * Sources
 * https://www.graceland.com/blog/posts/elvis-presley-and-the-blue-moon-boys/
 * https://bluemoonboy.bandcamp.com
 * https://www.graceland.com/blog/posts/elvis-presley-and-the-blue-moon-boys/
 * https://bluemoonboy.bandcamp.com

Option 2

 * Aristocrat of Bands
 * Article Evaluation
 * The articles talk page is inactive and the article is very, very short. You can definitely tell that not a lot of work has been put into this article yet. However, with the information given, the article covers the main points of some pf the bands success. There are not many sources presented and that can definitely be changed as there are a number of different sources out there to present the history and legacy of AOB properly. The organization is ok and can definitely be tweaked. Overall, the article is definitely something that can use a complete overhaul along with the information already given.
 * Sources
 * https://www.tnstate.edu/music/aristocrats.aspx https://www.wkrn.com/news/local-news/tennessee-state-university-featured-in-virtual-inaugural-celebration/
 * Sources
 * https://www.tnstate.edu/music/aristocrats.aspx https://www.wkrn.com/news/local-news/tennessee-state-university-featured-in-virtual-inaugural-celebration/

Option 3

 * Phineas Newborn Jr.
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is very well written and describes the life of Phineas Newborn well. The talk page is somewhat active and talks about some minor changes that can be made. I believe that there could be more images added to the article as it seems like he experienced quite a bit throughout his life. But the media and picture presented are illuminating. The organization os very well put together and it is easy to follow. The sources are very reliable and are all pretty accessible and up to date. Overall, this article is very well written with some minor issues but nothing that can be fixed or added.
 * Sources
 * https://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=950DE4DF1E3EF93BA15756C0A96F948260
 * https://www.jazzdisco.org/phineas-newborn-jr/discography/
 * https://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=950DE4DF1E3EF93BA15756C0A96F948260
 * https://www.jazzdisco.org/phineas-newborn-jr/discography/

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