User:The.Jeremiah02/sandbox

Shea Norman

Lead Section: The second is very brief and vague. It does include some information regarding the rest of the article but the paragraph structure is confusing and it does not lead to a strong introductory paragraph.

Content: The content is suitable for the amount of information given.

Tone and Balance: With the information given, the tone is fairly neutral.

Sources and References: The links to the sources work but the source looks a little dated and there are probably better sources out there.

Images and Media: There are not any images or media on the article.

Talk Page Discussion: The talk page is not very active.

Overall: The article has the potential to be very informative with the right sources and work put into it. The general information is there.