User:TheAlexRodriguez/Neighbourhood effect/Aamna11 Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? TheAlexRodriguez
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:TheAlexRodriguez/Neighbourhood effect

Lead
The lead is clear and easy to follow, and is a good introduction to the rest of your draft.

Content
The new content is very relevant to the idea of the Neighborhood Effect in the context of education. I like how you were able to talk about impact on students from lower income areas, because that's a very up-to-date issue that's been surrounding discourse about college admissions and higher education.

Tone and Balance
The information is neutral and doesn't have any obvious bias.

Sources and References
Generally all the claims are backed up with relevant sources, but there are some that need references, especially the ones about higher income neighborhoods having access to better resources and lower income students being hindered in their academic success based on social happenings in their neighborhoods.

Organization
The content is very, very well organized, flows well and is easy to read!

Overall impressions
Overall, these additions will greatly improve the article's quality and bring light to an important issue related to the Neighborhood Effect. I appreciated being able to learn from the new content, which is what Wikipedia is for!