User:TheAlexRodriguez/School-Based Family Counseling/Aamna11 Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? TheAlexRodriguez
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:TheAlexRodriguez/School-Based Family Counseling

Lead
The lead is cohesive and well written -- it explains current issues with SBFC without going into too much detail, which made me curious to keep reading.

Content
The content is relevant and up-to-date and provides multiple perspectives to support the idea that SBFC is lacking.

Tone and Balance
The content is neutral and provides multiple examples/perspectives to understand the shortcomings of a SBFC approach of problem solving.

Sources and References
Most claims are backed up with reputable sources, except the last one, where you cite data to explain which racial groups have access to mental health programs.

Organization
The content is organized in a logical way and is easy to follow.

Overall impressions
Overall, the existing article was more on the shorter side, with not much information on the 'Challenges' section, so I think your new content will really benefit it to be more reputable and provide more of a nuanced view of the effectiveness of the initiative.