User:TheChurroGuy/Andrena prunorum/Icinco Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TheChurroGuy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TheChurroGuy/Andrena_prunorum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Andrena prunorum

Lead
The lead is detailed without providing too much information about the rest of the article. It is definitely updated from the original page. I also liked how you've linked certain locations and species so that people can easily contextualize by going to these pages.

The original article has a context box, so it would be good to insert one for yours as well.

Life cycle and behavior
You can separate the first paragraph into two separate sentences. It just seems a bit like a run-on sentence. You've added good information on the sex differences in life-cycle and behavior, but what about physical appearance? Do they differ in size? pattern? wing-span?

Also you mentioned in the lead that this bee species is generally found in North and Central America. Can you add any information on more specific regions and the prevalence of these bees in said regions? Is there a reason why these bees like to stay in these areas?

Subspecies
I really like this section. Try linking these subspecies to their respective wiki pages (if they have any) just so people can get more info on the species you listed.

Tone and Balance
Language is neutral and unbiased. It's also very professional and informative. Great job!

Sources and References
Most of the sources are up-to date. A couple are from late 1900s, but this is fine. Really good job on pulling the info you have from these sources. Maybe some of them can answer the questions I listed above in the Content section? The sources are mostly from research papers and journals.

Organization
This page is very easy to read. Just include more of the information that I mentioned above and sort them into their respective sections and you'll be good!

Images and Media
The only image is that of an A. prunorum. Maybe you can include images that show the difference between the queen, worker bees, and drones in this species. The image here is well captioned in the taxobox.

Overall impressions
Great job on the paper. It was a very easy read which means it will be good for people who are not specialized in this field. Definitely add a bit more information on physical characteristics between sex and maybe add info on where they fit in their ecological niche.