User:TheKennayCarroll88/sandbox

Review of 13 grandmothers: Overall the article is decent. It is short sweet and straight to the point. However, I am disappointed on how broad the subject mater is in this article. It just gives an outline of who the grandmas are and their the representatives. It would be nice to have each member of the council have their own page. Also it would be nice to know what recent accomplishments they made and more recognition of said accomplishments. It seems that there would be more in depth information on this assemble of women. Any time a group of people from different walks of life and different countries get together with a same common goal, only good can come from the meeting. It would be interesting to hear the whole story on what happened at the Vatican.

Review of resources: Its good that many resources where used however they are mostly 4-10 years old. Surly these grandmothers are more active. The article even states that they meet every six months. Surly they have more recent recorded information.

Improvement: The article does site the 13 grandmothers home page: (About Us page at International Council of 13 Indigenous Grandmothers website, accessed June 8, 2013.) However the only information pulled was from the about section and was last accessed in 2013. When i went to the web site, 2017, their is a whole media/ blog section on the website with tons of research links. Sadly the most recent enter was in 2014. On a positive note, I did find a documentary by Carole Hart that was released in 2009 that might be worth a watch with possible reliable information.