User:TheOliveGreen1234567/Hygieia/Secotuff Peer Review

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 * Hygieia - Wikipedia

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I really liked the lead in this article, it summarized Hygieia very well and gave a nice general overview of the information we needed to know.

I feel like you should have kept the information about her Roman name in there, and maybe provided a link to that page for completeness.

The different sections make sense and don't detract from each other.

There does not seem to be any different points of view that are being excluded and/or preferred over another.

I felt like the sources and citation in this article where very well done.