User:TheOliveGreen1234567/Hygieia/Whatifidontwannabe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TheOliveGreen1234567


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TheOliveGreen1234567/Hygieia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hygieia

Evaluate the drafted changes
You've done a lot in terms of reorganization of the article, as well as adding citations for content considering the goddess. The intro you edited feels really solid, and the informational sections make a lot more sense. I found the quote in the section "Worship" to be a little on the longer side, and a little hard to get through as a reader, perhaps you could split it up or cut it down to help frame it? I also was interested in the line under the "Worship" section that mentions women's hair on Hygieia's statues which really intrigued me and if you have time or are able to find more information about that, I would totally be interested to know if there's a correlation between Hygieia and fertility/cleanliness and womanhood. Overall I think it's a really strong start and I look forward to seeing where this goes! Good luck!