User:TheRealJackyT/The Narrows (Petry novel)/Kpurple Peer Review

General info
TheRealJackyT
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 * User:TheRealJackyT/The Narrows (Petry novel)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Narrows (Petry novel)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead is concise, however, it doesn’t include any major sections of the book (could maybe add a sentence stating what the book is about). My peer added a sentence about the narration of the book which was a useful addition!

Another addition could be a background section that incudes where the name “The Narrows” came from instead of putting it in the lead, which will create room for the major section(s) of the book.

Sources: The sources added were relevant and provided useful details to the page.

Content: All content added seemed to be very relevant, especially the addition of two characters to the character section. Along with that, adding another major setting was a great choice! As far as some of the revisions, the original had some of grammar issues and my peer did a good job of fixing them.

Tone and Balance: Everything is neutral sounding and non persuasive!

Organization: I noticed that my peer shifted some of the existing information to make it easier to read, another good choice considering the amount of words.

Overall suggestions: Check over spelling, just for the sake of double checking. Also, an info box if you can will make the page look more complete.