User:TheResearchRaven/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Chondrocalcinosis.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I enjoy learning pathology. It matters because we see it a lot as radiographers, but not many of us know exactly what chondrocalcinosis is or much about it. My preliminary impression was that the article has a lot of room for educational additions.

Evaluate the article
Everything in the article seems relevant and has a neutral tone. There were 11 listed causes listed for chondrocalcinosis- and while I do believe this is relevant information, at this time it is a bit distracting because this list makes up most of the "bulk" of the article. With more information, the list should be less distracting. Most information is fairly up-to-date, except for a citation from 1997. More modern citations could greatly improve the validity of the article. Equity gaps are evident in the article. I would like to research if chondrocalcinosis affects people of different races, sex, and socioeconomic classes. All in all, this article could be improved just with more information.