User:TheSunshineGirl/Impression management/CanyonMoon44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TheSunshineGirl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TheSunshineGirl/Impression management


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Impression management

Lead
TheSunshineGirl has copied the lead into their sandbox as is. The current lead on the article is pretty good but it is lengthy. I would suggest TheSunshineGirl trim it down a bit in any way they can.

Content / Tone / Sources / Organization

TheSunshineGirl has updated the article to include a new source. Their sandbox draft looks they are going to expand on the Manipulation and Ethics section of the article. I think it would be important to update the positive and negative impacts social media has had on impression management. They could include the popularity of TikTok as well as they way public figures present themselves and their brands on social media. They also have five great sources in their sandbox as well.

Overall

The article overall is fairly strong, I believe it could just use some minor tweaks and updates. TheSunshineGirl's addition to the Manipulation and Ethics section is very well-written. I am looking forward to seeing the edits TheSunshineGirl makes to this article.