User:TheWittyOwls/Skunk City/Jacook15 Peer Review

General info
TheWittyOwls, Olivia Valcourt
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:TheWittyOwls/Skunk City
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Skunk City

Evaluate the drafted changes
Off the bat, I would like to know what "a number of years" means. It's difficult to be specific with an unofficial name, but if you can give the general decade that people began calling this neighborhood "Skunk City" then it adds a good amount of context to your article.

Do you know generally how many skunks live in the area or how many compared to other neighborhoods in Central New York?

It's good that you have links to other Wikipedia pages because it adds something very official-looking to your page.

There is some fantastic detail about the history of the region, but I think some context into how Skunk City changed from a mostly White background to a largely Black and Hispanic one would add something valuable.

I very much appreciate the dedication to the environmental aspects you included. That helps understand the atmosphere and smell, especially in a place characterized by skunks.

I would appreciate it if you could bring in some historic events that might be well-known, even if it's simply locally in Syracuse.