User:The Purple Hamster/Murder of Balbir Singh Sodhi/Earlgray68 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Purple Hamster


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:The%20Purple%20Hamster/Murder_of_Balbir_Singh_Sodhi?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Murder of Balbir Singh Sodhi

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like what you added. I think the “attitudes towards the Sikh community” section adds a lot of context and puts this incident in perspective. I’m really interested in the memorialization section that you added. I wonder what else you could add to this, or if there is any more information on it. How did Sodhi’s family react to his murder? Did his community unite and stand up after his death?