User:The Silvarius/Genshin Impact/BUknight Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Silvarius


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Genshin Impact


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Genshin Impac t

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: After looking at the current article, you might consider adding a sentence to the lead about the music/music impact of the game.

Content: The content you plan to add so far is relevant and up-to-date. It may be a little sparse, but any updates to Wikipedia are good for the community! One thing to consider might be looking at how many views the YouTube concert got, and any criticism of the concert/music in general. Overall, the tone is neutral and pretty much balanced--I'm not familiar with the game so I don't know if there are any criticism or other viewpoints to talk about in the article. Another idea--since the concert was a live orchestra, the musicians might have made public statements about the Genshin music?

Sources: for the information you plan to add so far, the sources are good.

Overall: I think the edits you have made so far add good information to the article. I do think there might be some other areas of Genshin music to investigate and consider adding to the article, but so far great job!

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