User:The Silvarius/Genshin Impact/Tomasoccer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Silvarius


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:The%20Silvarius/Genshin_Impact?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Genshin Impact

Evaluate the drafted changes
As a person who plays video games on a daily basis, it was interesting to see your sandbox talking about some of the music aspect in the game. The article is written in a neutral way, and all the sources are well cited and are recent. Specially since the game was created in 2020.

Looking at the "To Do List," it seems that there will be more added to this article to sections that are not related.

Also, I am wondering if your main paragraph you are working on right now it's going to need in text citation. I saw that you mentioned them right below that main paragraph. However, I think you might have to mention those resources on your main paragraph.

Overall, the content is interesting, relevant to the topic, well written, correctly cited. It is really easy to see that the topic is something that The Silvarius is interested on, and that makes it have the quality and development I see on the sandbox draft.