User:The Silvarius/Splatoon/Phil the Human Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Silvarius


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:The%20Silvarius/Splatoon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Splatoon

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good information about tour locations, but adding specific dates would benefit the article. Citations are also needed for the locations of the concerts, and I would suggest revising the portion about KK Slider to "... collaborated with Animal Crossing: New Horizons to include fictional character K.K. Slider as the opening act on October 13, 2019." Possibly link to Koushien and Polymanga Wikipedia pages for more context? Overall, tone is good and content benefits the original article. Sources are reliable and up-to-date.