User:The Silvarius/Splatoon (video game)/Tomasoccer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Silvarius


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:The%20Silvarius/Splatoon_(video_game)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Splatoon (video game)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at the Sandbox "To Do List," it seems that The Silvarius still has plenty of ideas to improve the main article. What I saw until this review seemed well redacted, in a neutral way, with recent, reliable sources. I like the extra work of adding links to certain words like Corocoro Comic and Viz Media. Those are details that readers find useful when navigating through Wikipedia.

I was looking at the source mentioning how the game was distributed to English speaking countries but it mostly mentions how the game was translated. I don't if maybe I understood something wrong or that is the main purpose of that resource. Overall, it is a great article for Wikipedia, and well redacted.