User:The Silvarius/Splatoon 2: Octo Expansion/ReginaPhalange4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The Silvarius


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:The%20Silvarius/Splatoon_2:_Octo_Expansion?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Splatoon 2: Octo Expansion

Evaluate the drafted changes
I guess I'm sort of confused, because the live Wikipedia article looks to be much more complete than this draft. I'm not sure if it's been added to since the draft began or what, but that seems a bit odd to me. Anyway, from what I can see this article looks to be pretty comprehensive, although, again, different from the published version already live on Wikipedia. I think it's great you've included a section on the music specifically, as that part seems to have been overlooked in the published version. The content and way you've broken everything down seems to be very efficient, and the content is relevant to the topic at hand. This draft seems to be broken down and written very well, and it seems much less overwhelming than the published version already on Wikipedia. Overall I think this seems to be a great start, it just feels like it needs some more development before publishing, of which you may already be well aware.