User:Thea.sar/Pissodes strobi/Pitandpendulum Peer Review

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Thea.sar
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 * Pissodes strobi
 * Pissodes strobi

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You've added a lot of good information, especially in terms of reproduction. Your sources look good, I would just double-check your citation formatting. I would also look over your sentence structure, it seems a bit same-y. I would also see if you can re-word this sentence for clarity: "and after winter passes in the following spring these adults which were once larvae in the previous spring will reproduce and females will continue to lay eggs in host trees". I would remove the latter half of this sentence: "While certain trees may have resistance to an attack by white pine weevils, this does not necessarily mean they will not be attacked," as that strays slightly from total neutrality. Slight reworking of this: "This involves factors that aid resistance to white pine weevil attacks, but also factors that may encourage pine weevils to initiate an attack on more resistant trees, like food scarcity. A possible reason for resistance to white pine weevil attacks, and ensuing damage, is the white pine weevil's reaction to resistant trees. This involves the reproductive capabilities of the white pine weevils being affected, which can be seen in interruptions to growth of the ovaries" to make it fit with that first changed sentence will help the section read a bit smoother.