User:Thealexjr100/Meridian (novel)/Angela Apple Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Thealexjr100


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thealexjr100/Meridian_%28novel%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Meridian (novel)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There is a random "by" in the sentence "Nelda by chooses to keep her baby and stay with her husband" I would just remove that.

I think quotes are usually frowned upon on wikipedia, if that's so then I think the first paragraph can easily do without them.

Overall, well written.