User:Thebullfrogwhisperer/Phyllomedusa trinitatis/Yunfeng Ge Peer Review

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This Wikipedia entry provide a well-rounded introduction to the mating behavior, development, and life cycle of frog P. trinitatis. However, for other parts of the entry, including description, geographic range, diet, and predators, there are too few information in each section. More information should be added to each section. Also the leading section is not comprehensive enough for covering everything in the content. All reference and citation are pretty decent. Although some articles are written in 1990s, Other articles used were all published after 2000. This means the information is pretty up to date.

What I changed:

I added some more sentences in the leading section to make it more comprehensive. The development and life cycle contains too much information under the same heading, which can be overwhelming for the readers. Thus, I restructured it by creating two subheadings - Physical development and life cycle. I also italicized all species scientific names in the article.