User:Thechipskylark3/Haymarket, Virginia/Charisajm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thechipskylark3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thechipskylark3/Haymarket,_Virginia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Haymarket, Virginia

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I saw in this sandbox draft, the student updated the demographics section and added more schools to the education section. They also included references at the bottom from the sources they used to gather the new information. I think it was important to fix the demographics because it wouldn't be as relevant or useful to not have the most recent information. The education part didn't have very much in it so it's probably good that more was put in. I will say that the police department and transportation sections could also use some work. I'm not sure if there needs to be another section, but it could be beneficial to include something else if there is any other interesting facts about this city. The stuff that was added seemed to be neutral, as it was mainly just the numbers getting updated. Maybe there could be more information about each of the schools, and that way it won't just be when they opened.