User:Thedailyplanet1938/Gatekeeping (communication)/RB88986P Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Thedailyplanet1938


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Thedailyplanet1938/Gatekeeping (communication) - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gatekeeping (communication) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Gatekeeping is a topic I loved studying in undergrad and I thought your contribution was useful to explaining the topic. The information you added helps to explain the use of gatekeeping in a political sense.

I think it would be helpful to explain to the audience what first stage and second stage players are. You can even link it to a wiki page explaining it to make things easier. You use a balanced tone that does not appear to be subjective. It's also great that you added the reference in case readers would like to read more into the origin of the information.

Overall, this information will be a great addition to the exsisting article, especially if you find more information to expand the point you are making.