User:Thegayginger/Star Vega (psychologist)/Alexis Lhotka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Thegayginger


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Star Vega (psychologist)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thegayginger/Star_Vega_%28psychologist%29?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Lead

 * Is there any more information on her personal life that you can add? The lead (and the draft as a whole) could use more information on her.

Content

 * Content is relevant, but you did not add anything to the draft from the up-to-date sources that you have in your bibliography
 * There is a lot of missing content. I hope you include some of the information covered in your bibliography when you revise this draft.
 * The article deals with mostly general information

Tone and Balance

 * The content is neutral and as unbiased as possible; it does not seem to try to persuade the reader of anything.

Sources and References

 * All the links in the initial article are good, but I suggest adding any other sources to your draft, because there are currently no new ones.

Organization

 * The content matches the voice of Wikipedia extremely well
 * I do not see any spelling or grammar errors.
 * You should add more sections, perhaps on her personal illness, upbringing, and a more detailed section about her research.

Images and Media

 * No images added-- if you can get some that are not copyright protected, images of her would be important. Perhaps reach out to a relative of her if there are any available?

Overall impressions

 * The size of the article was doubled, but there are no new sources.
 * More content needs to be added.