User:Thegayginger/Star Vega (psychologist)/Madchurch Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thegayginger and group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the information on this article is very helpful and straight to the point when trying to understand who Star Vega was!

Additionally, I think that this article is very neutral regarding Star Vega. Which is all you could ask for in a wiki article!

The only critiques I would include is that..

- I would try to look into getting a portrait of Star Vega, it would help readers to connect the facts within this article to a face!

- I would make sure that there are reference citations added to the main article page.

- And, finally, I saw in the bibliography that some pieces of the citations are missing. Ex: web link and journal links, I am pretty sure?? (I am just looking at whatever is bright red under references)

That is all I have to say, keep up the good work!