User:Thehandwordandlaw/Barriere Lake Trilateral Agreement/Kschwar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thehandwordandlaw


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thehandwordandlaw/Barriere_Lake_Trilateral_Agreement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * Strong lead with good background!
 * I think you could possibly reword the first sentence to add a bit more clarity for example - is an agreement signed between X and X outlining the framework for managing X.

Content


 * Content is relevant and up-to-date
 * Content helps to address Wikipedia's knowledge gap around indigenous topics

Tone and Balance


 * Great neutral tone - hard to do considering the topic and your passion surrounding the topic!

Sources and References


 * Good use of sources and references. You draw on the agreement itself a lot which strengthens the article
 * You could possibly add more sources and resources for interested people to check out

Organization


 * Great organization and flow - your section headers make sense and in how they are organized

Images and Media


 * An image or two could strengthen your article, but are not necessary

New Article


 * Meets notability requiremnents
 * List of sources could be lengthened a bit
 * Could link to more articles to increase discoverability

Overall Impressions


 * Great article! This will really help address some of the gap in Wikipedia's indigenous knowledge database. You have added good sources and relevant information on the topic. In the future, hopefully this article can be expanded upon and connected to a greater web of indigenous related information.

-Kayden