User:Theinbetween909/sandbox

This article does a nice job outlining the work of Jennifer McMahon, but it could use some work. As the writer discussed more of her work that was put out less background information was given about it. It would have been helpful if the writer discussed the basis or importance of some of her work. In this way the article is a bit underdeveloped.

In addition to points being underdeveloped, there were not many citations, but many facts about publishing were given.