User:Thekevanator/Hydro Flask/Jiyenita Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thekevanator


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Thekevanator/sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jeshua Anderson

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello! here's my review on your article "Jeshua Anderson" so far. I think you have found a lot of his achievements which is a great start! Content-wise I think you did a good job researching for more information on his achievements.

- I would suggest adding a picture(s) of Jeshua Anderson on your article to enhance the readers' understanding on how Jeshua Anderson looks like

- I would suggest to add more of his personal information if possible for the Lead section? I see that you have also added that he is a 4 time all American which I think would be a great addition to the Lead section!

- I would suggest adding his most well-known/greatest achievement as well as the number of the time/distance record in the Lead.

I think it would also be nice if you could re arrange and organize the sections (as seen in the original article) into a chronological order.