User:Thekevanator/Jeshua Anderson/Kaig2000 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

thekevanator


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 * User:Thekevanator/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jeshua Anderson

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey thekevantor, on a personal note I just wanted to mention it was really cool to read your draft... my boyfriend runs xc/track for uw and he's always said really great things about Jeshua. Overall, I thought you did a really awesome job fluffing the personal info section. The information you added was relevant and well structured chronologically. In terms of images, I thought the ones you had were great, however maybe including some of Anderson when he was in college and perhaps even high school to help to round out the visual aspect. I thought you might also  consider adding a note about his sponsorships (I believe he was sponsored by Nike (?)). Sponsorships are pretty big milestones in an athletes' career so adding a section devoted to this would help to thoroughly cover career highlights. Other than that I'd just say consider adding some more current personal info (marriage etc.?) Again, great job !