User:Thenoirroze/Lafayette Sq/LAmadefairy Peer Review

Your lead was very informative. It had a clear intro sentence & it described your topic really well. The article had a very nice neutral tone & your information balanced really well together as well. The images you used had well written descriptions and they appeared to be cited correctly also.

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