User:Theplayer28/Maladaptive daydreaming/Gavin022502 Peer Review

General info
theplayer28
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Theplayer28/Maladaptive daydreaming
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maladaptive daydreaming

Evaluate the drafted changes
The tone of the article felt neutral, and the information presented is for the most part cohesive and straightforward.

However, there are no sources cited for any of the information in the lead and the article body. If sources have been used for the information presented it is vital they are cited to avoid plagiarism.

the choice of imagery fits well and is relevant to the topic, and makes a great visualization for the topic.