User:Theplayer28/Maladaptive daydreaming/Sbeno0021 Peer Review

General info
(provide username)-The player 28
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Theplayer28/Maladaptive_daydreaming?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Maladaptive daydreaming

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) Add references its very hard to follow where sources are from
 * 2) Grammar needs work
 * 3) add more info
 * 4) Refrences?