User:Therna1/McKinley Thompson Jr./Mhelenap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Therna1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Therna1/McKinley_Thompson_Jr.?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * McKinley Thompson Jr.

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sources you chose seem to be very informative I would just work on finding maybe more on his actual concepts and designs.

I think for the background information you have on the draft and that already exists on the article maybe consider doing a section dedicated to education...there seems to be a lot of information on that. Continue expanding on the concept cars; what you have on the cougar II is well written and easy to understand.

Overall, good information given that the Wiki article already has a lot of good basic info.