User:Theron burger/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Nancy Kirk

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have Chosen this article as it is the article that my group will be editing together, as well as the fact that Nancy Kirk is a women in geology, this article is rated as a C and therefore, my group and I will be able to improve this article a substantial amount.

Evaluate the article
Lead section

- the lead of this article is very concise and allows for a overview as to what the article will contain and be talking about. however, it does not include an a brief description of what will be in the article in terms of sub sections.

Content

- this article includes all relevant information, however, the article has been edited recently and up to date, yet it can still be updated with more helpful information for the reader.

Tone and Balance

- I find the article to be neutral, I don't find any unnecessary bias. therefore, this is a article that would not pursued a reader in a certain direction.

Sources and references.

- the sources in the article appear to be from secondary reliable sources that are relevant and up to date, not all the sources are from different authors which is helpful in order to create an unbias setting. on the article all of the links in the bibliography are functioning.

organization and writing quality.

- this article is poorly written, there are may grammatical errors as well as spelling errors that does not allow the article to be easily read and does not flow.

Images and media

- the article does include one image, however, I believe that it is not the only relevant image that could be incorporated in this article.

the image is captioned correctly and does not provide any confusion to the reader. the image does conform to Wikipedia copy right regulations.

Talk page discussion

- there are no conversations of the talk page of this Wikipedia page. this article is rated at a C- class and is involved in one project, wikiproject woman scientists

Overall impression.

- overall i feel that is is a good article but could do with a lot of editing and updating in order to make it a little bit more user friendly and allows for user readability.