User:Thetb45/Warren Bennis/RTRuss23 Peer Review

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Thetb45
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Warren Bennis - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Warren Bennis - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I very much enjoy your writing style. Your sentences are organized and succinct. The lead sentence/paragraph is well written and to the point. There are a lot of quotations in the first section. I would just check to make sure that you aren't able to summarize and eliminate them when you have the opportunity. Your sections are organized well and your tone is neutral and balanced. Your sources appear to be proper and chosen well. I would add more meat to the "impact" section, perhaps going into more detail. I also missed any information about his early life, such as where he was born, etc. Overall, great work!