User:ThirdBrownEye/Nandipha Mntambo/Erikaerika222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ThirdBrownEye, Madisonvital, Phoenixt8, Cbatem5,


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ThirdBrownEye/Nandipha Mntambo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nandipha Mntambo

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello!

For your article, I saw your outline of what needed to be done in the sandbox. I like the idea of sectioning off her work into categories. I feel like that'll make the article easier to read. When adding a picture of Mntambo's artwork, I think it would be best if you chose an artwork from one of her solo exhibitions that's listed in the article, and you can add a few sentences about it. Or maybe you could choose different artworks from the different categories that you have listed in your sandbox [i.e. sex, violence, etc.] and describe those [i.e. what's the meaning/inspiration behind the artwork?, etc.].