User:ThirdBrownEye/Nandipha Mntambo/Jonahwebs Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ThirdBrownEye


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ThirdBrownEye/Nandipha_Mntambo?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nandipha Mntambo

Evaluate the drafted changes
ThirdBrownEye's drafted changes present a thoughtful and expansive plan to effectively revise the existing article for the artist, which, while featuring an extensive account of the artist's philosophy, does not have usual details like an article and biography information. ThirdBrownEye's plan features these inclusions and new sources to cite for including new information. Overall, the user's changes, while nascent, are promising.