User:ThomasSavage111/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * 10th New York Cavalry


 * Article Evaluation
 * Contains some good information, but is not written well. The information should be written in a more presentable manner rather than just listed in one giant paragraph. Could use more information and hopefully some images. I easily found images on the web and other "10th New York Cavalry" that could be used.


 * Sources
 * Only has three of them and they are all super old! Is it possible to find more recent sources or other people who are currently working on this as a historical event?

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Alaska Passage


 * Article Evaluation
 * The written piece about the cast is very detailed and linked in the actors Wikipages, which is great! However, the description of the actual play and what actually happens in the play could be much better. There is basically no information about what the play is about, it only talks about the actors. Adding a section to the page with a strong account of what happens in the play would be great. Also, adding pictures would be a good idea. Could I add some way to watch the movie on the Wikipage? Is that a good idea?


 * Sources
 * There are only four of them. They all come from very good sources that are peer reviewed. The only issue is that they are very old articles because the film is from the 1950's.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Dentistry in rural Alaska


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is some pretty useful information but they could add more links to locations where rural Alaskan Dentists serve. They dont really talk about it at all. They really should as some modern pictures. They could also add vintage pictures of they have them and attach them to the places in the articles that talk about how dentistry in this area has increased over the years.


 * Sources
 * Overall they are pretty good. In the article they talk a lot about laws that have helped increase service provided to rural Alaska but they dont link to direct legal sources, they use dental sources to tell the legal changes that look place.