User:Thomas Lazuli Quickdagger/History of religion in the United States/Gemjk19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thomas Lazuli Quickdagger


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thomas%20Lazuli%20Quickdagger/History_of_religion_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of religion in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, it seems like you haven't started any drafts for your article yet or you have just been making contributions directly into the live article in which case I'm not sure how to go about finding your specific additions. Or perhaps you put your draft on another page that I haven't been able to find, but I can peer review what you have here.

I think you have a really strong bibliography if you plan on using any of those sources. I also really like your plan for improving the article. It's a great idea to ask about the topic you want to add about US Presidents and religion in the Talk page to see what others think. Overall, if you're planning to make changes/drafts or already have, you made a great start at it.