User:Thomas Simbo K./Telehealth/Jfelmgart Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thomas Simbo K.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Telehealth
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Telehealth

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * "The downside of using mHealth applications is that not everyone, especially in developing countries, have daily access to internet or electronic devices." I would use a source for this
 * "Some non-profit such as the Christian organization Mission Aviation Fellowship (MAF) provide internet to rural places around the world using a mobile VSAT terminal. This VSAT terminal equips remote regions allowing them to alert the world when there is a medical emergency, resulting in a rapid deployment or response from developed countries ( can I site another Wikipedia article? ). Technologies such as the ones used by MAF allows health professionals in remote clinics to have internet access, making consultations much easier, both for patients and doctors." I would also add a source for this
 * Your work is really good and the content is concise and clear! The content appears to be up to date but you should possibly add in some dates. The article is definitely more compete and I think the addition of sub-headings is helpful just make sure to include the