User:Thomasdquigley/Oyster toadfish/Jjherlan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thomasdquigley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thomasdquigley/Oyster_toadfish?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Oyster toadfish
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Oyster toadfish

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Spawning and Life History

Paragraph 1: The introduction to the article is concise and directs the reader to the topic of spawning quickly. It is recommended to fully divide the two paragraphs fully: the first one focused on the spawning behavior and the second focused on life history.

Prey and Predators

Paragraph 1: Change hove to have

Paragraph 2: Is there any evidence of specific predatory behavior against cormorants or dolphins? That's interesting.

Physiology

The fast-twitch swimbladder is interesting, is that rate fast compared to other bony-fish?

Model for Hearing and Behavior

Does anthropogenic noise affect the fitness of toadfish?

Review Summary

This is a well written and straight forward article. The author introduces the biology of the oyster toadfish but more examples of anthropogenic impacts on the fitness, if any, of these fish would be interesting to include.