User:Thomasquinnild/Civic application/Zeinaxd Peer Review

I think that this page has a great set up and is well broken up. However, I think that there could be more depth and analysis/content in his paragraphs as most of them are a sentence or two meaning that there isn't much substance there. I would also suggest maybe posting a relevant picture as that helps change the dynamic of the page and catch the readers attention with a detailed annotation on the bottom.

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