User:ThoomBOY/Malinvestment/Osetiawan1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Thoomboy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ThoomBOY/Malinvestment?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Malinvestment

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the explanation of what a Maliinvestment is clear with references to economists to back up your points. One thing you could add is an example of Maliinvest that has happened in the past so the reader can further understand what this concept is. Also I think you need to cite 2 other sources to so you have 5 sources total for the assignment. Other than that everything looks great as your writing seems neutral and non biased.