User:Thor2022/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Video game console. this is the link to the article I have evaluated.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am interested in playing video games and naturally I went to search up this article. It was interesting to learn about history of video games in many instances it made me more interested in my major of computer science. I realized the importance and the disadvantages of the video games.

Evaluate the article
Lead

yes the lead is about four sentences which define video games and how it is placed in a house or any place. I found the sentences were very long although it describe the overview very clearly.

Content

There is no any missing content that I can think of. There is brief content about history, types, components, market competition and other. I just cannot find the name of the console games the types of the games in article. some famous games that we can play in the console are FIFA (soccer), gpa, maiden(football), pub g, counter strike, Valorent and many more.

Tone and balance

In my view, the tone and balance is very good. In this article, some things are not neutral like it has been mentioned that video games console should be placed in a fixed position like living room or bedroom. I think there are some portable console and we can use them anywhere.the article has also mentioned all types of pricing, console unit, online services and many more. with these brief description about everything in the article is great for the audience to read and gain the knowledge.

Sources and references

The references are also very good. some of the very good reference are about how do this graphics cards work?, next generations console concepts are very interesting. there was also the reference about how Microsoft decided not to share about the x-box which help to decide the pricing.yes, the sources are the very reliable. yes and I have checked few links and they works but some few of the are forbidden.

Organization and writing quality

The writing quality and the way the article is organized is very concise and clear. Although, some of the sentences are very long to read. the way the topics are described are very good and help the reader to understand briefly about the console history, pricing, components and many more.

Images and media

There are many images about the console, motherboard, joystick, overview of console generation. The images are very clear and audience are see the components and other parts of the console. The images are not copyright.

Talk page discussion

I could not find the talk page discussion. there are other links in the article which can lead to the main article of the topic.

Overall impressions

overall impression is excellent. I really like the content and the images included in the wikipedia. The article is very easy to understand and read. I get to learn about the name of motherboard, name of old generation console and leading console brand right now. There is nothing much to improve on the article. My only one suggestion is to keep on updating the price of the console.